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By Mayowa Atte
Among the countless reasons people write stories, getting a moral across ranks near the top. Unfortunately, getting a moral across also ranks near the top of reason people write terrible stories. The danger lies in an incorrect balance of moral and other story elements (plot, pace, character development, voice, tension etc.) resulting in a preachy story.
Follow these guidelines and you will end up with a story that entertains your readers and effectively communicates your moral and message without being preachy.
Story Is King:This is the first and crucial understanding.
No matter how important the moral is, no matter how intensely a writer feels
about the moral, focusing on story elements always benefits the story (and
moral) more than focusing on the moral. When the plot is entertaining and the
characters are well developed, when the writing is crisp and eloquent, the
reader cares more about the story world and is more likely to consider the
moral.
Morals Are Output:
The desired effect is for a reader to finish your story, consider the story
elements and arrive at a conclusion equal or similar to your moral. The moral
itself is never an explicit part of the story elements, it is not spoken in
dialog nor is it narrated by the narrator. Resist all urges to have one of
your characters give a lengthy speech on the moral. Think of your moral as a
completed jigsaw puzzle, only when all the pieces are considered does one see
the picture.
Make Morals Sexy:
Readers can spot morals from a hundred pages away because most people are
familiar with popular morals and don't want to read several thousand words
just to find out something they already know. A writer can infuse morals with
new life by using an unfamiliar variation of popular morals or by picking
uncommon morals. Even if a moral is as familiar as "children should obey your
parents," writers can still excite and surprise the reader by arriving at the
moral in an unfamiliar way.
Morals Are Your Story Compass:
When a writer knows that the entire story (and not individual elements)
leads the reader to the morals, it helps the writer make many decisions about
the story elements. To continue our jigsaw puzzle analogy, if a writer knows
what the completed jigsaw puzzle looks like, the writer can create the right
pieces for the puzzle.
Good luck and remember to be subtle.
About the Author: Mayowa Atte is a novelist, blogger and
observer of the publishing industry. Visit his website at
http://www.penswithcojones.com for more articles on writing and
publishing
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